[KuroKaze] - LIGHTS -

Hey!
You have improved quite a lot. The overall structure of the clip is really nice, the action parts and verse parts are nicely separate. I did not like the rsmb in the build up part in the beginning of the video you should have added that to some motion/fight clips imo. Furthermore the black gaps/flashes are not that aesthetic in my opinion so I would suggest that you come up with a different solution to hitting the multiple beats. Also 0:45 i really did not like, you should have done something different there for sure maybe even a twitch or something.

Hey thanks 4 the comment

Breaker wrote:

Furthermore the black gaps/flashes are not that aesthetic in my opinion so I would suggest that you come up with a different solution to hitting the multiple beats

-I'll look into it more

Breaker wrote:

Also 0:45 i really did not like, you should have done something different there for sure maybe even a twitch or something.

-I used twitch but AE wasn't rendering . And i don't think there is for SV (or i don't know)

Breaker wrote:

I did not like the rsmb in the build up part in the beginning of the video you should have added that to some motion/fight clips imo.

-I'll try to lay off it the next time.

Breaker wrote:

You have improved quite a lot. The overall structure of the clip is really nice, the action parts and verse parts are nicely separate.

-Thank you . Although i still have problems(/am not confortable) doing slow parts T_T