yo Fobos!
I didn't like the zooms at 0:49 and 1:03, the eye transi at 1:14 was weird aswell, sideways eye transis always look weird, as do inwards going eye transis. When the beat came in I found that your editing lacked impact, it would've helped if you put some flickers on it and maybe some glows or colourful edges. But considering that this is an old video I can say good job!
So, thanks for your attention man 
