AMV - Narcissistic [Fate]

Bonjour ^^ j'aimerais des coms construit plz Wink
INFO :
•DL : mediafire.com watch/wkfa5bdw74t7w8u/AMV_-_Narcissistic_[Fate].mp4
•Software : Sony vegas pro 11 - Photoshop - AE
•Music : Earlyrise - Narcissistic Cannibal
•Anime : Fate Stay
•Time editing : 3 Day

Yo! You should introduce yourself first. I can only give you my comment after you introduce yourself ^^
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Bon je go me presenter alors xD

Hi stranger!!
Like Breaker said, go introduce yourself

About your video. It was an enjoyable watch. The pace was pretty ok but sometimes too slow. Also there was this weird slide at 0:37-0:38 - we can see the guy lying in bed so the slide doesn't really make sense, I think that a zoom would have been better. I also didn't like the text at 0:51 at all. If you want to use text then you could maybe make a wallpaper or a poster or something, add the lyrics of the song and mask someone over it or something, that would be a lot cooler. The outro was really stylish but sometimes the text was weird to read (anks for watchin and so on xD).
Overall the video is not bad, good job!