You have improved quite a lot. The overall structure of the clip is really nice, the action parts and verse parts are nicely separate. I did not like the rsmb in the build up part in the beginning of the video you should have added that to some motion/fight clips imo. Furthermore the black gaps/flashes are not that aesthetic in my opinion so I would suggest that you come up with a different solution to hitting the multiple beats. Also 0:45 i really did not like, you should have done something different there for sure maybe even a twitch or something.