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PostSubject: Re: [Agito] - Hunter's Creed   [Agito] - Hunter's Creed EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 8:59 am

Yooo!
Overall i enjoyed your clip there were no big mistakes it flowed really well and it was pretty clean.
But your camera movements need work, they are too rough like at 0:39 and also the FMA leaf transition is sooo overused XD that i'm already sick of seeing it but that's just me. Also the mask at 1:58 don't be lazy and chroma key hohohohohoho  just mask, masking is fun http://s22.postimg.o
And the part at 2:06 try to avoid changing motion roughly like that, what i mean by that is that the motion goes inwards at first but then there's an outward zoom it really kills the motion you should have continued the inward motion or just transitioned to the other scene.
Well i liked it good luck on your next project O/
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PostSubject: Re: [Agito] - Hunter's Creed   [Agito] - Hunter's Creed EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 9:26 am

Hi Agito o/

The beginning of your clip was really cool but at 0:25 it became really rough (like Breaker said - fix your camera movements) When the chorus hit the flow became nice again. 1:21 - 1:32 was dope. lol chroma key xDD Also the colours at the end looked kinda bland :/
Overall nice job Agito (Y)

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PostSubject: Re: [Agito] - Hunter's Creed   [Agito] - Hunter's Creed EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 1:53 pm

yeah, I was too lazy! xDD Thanks guys! I appriciate your opinion!^^

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