Your clips is pretty cool ^^ the pace was handled well and there were no big mistakes.
But i suggest avoiding transitions like 0:36. These kinds of transitions don't really make sense they aren't logical. Also your flares for example at 0:39 yellow doesn't really fit because the scene you're transitioning from isn't yellow and the scene you're transitioning to isn't yellow either. The same goes for a couple of other flares.
Masks were clean and 0:33-0:35 was boss
Yeah nothing much to say xD
Good luck with the rankings and on to the next!