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PostSubject: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Thu Jun 05, 2014 5:24 am


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PostSubject: Re: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Thu Jun 05, 2014 8:59 pm

OK!!
FT track: not bad, it was pretty cool for a beginning. What i didn't like were the typos and the lip flaps  No .

SNK track: Editingwise it wasn't bad but the editor edited the track like it was the chorus :/ It was the first verse so it would have been better to edit it like a build up Smile

BRS track: this was pretty cool, i liked it GG no real problems here

Kill la Kill track: the beginning was really good with all of the transitions and stuff but the clip at 0:51-some seconds after was too long IMO, other than that GG

KnK track: The main problem here would be the logo in the upper right corner No you can blur it out or crop it out. The editing was ok i just didn't like the typo.

Karas track: This was really cool, probably my favourite GG.

Ippo track: IT was also cool, no big problems here, maybe that one eye transi, it seemed a little weird but it's not that big of a deal GG Razz

Saint Seiya track: the lip flaps and the splits were really annoying, the lip sync was cool tho

DMWL track: Cool track  http://illiweb.com/i 

Bleach track: I'm not sure but it seems like it's stretched  silent IMO it was messy but still cool, it would have been better if the clips would have made sense , what i mean is that the editor could've linked the fights.

HxH track: OK, i love everything hxh related  bounce  The track was pretty cool i just didn't like the slide thing at the end :/ i know that the editor tried to sync but IMO that effect is really ugly  No 

Naruto track: watch out with the logo!! Ok, this track had it's up and downs. I can tell that the editor is creative but some of the transitions were really ugly, like the one at 2:31, it's too slow and seems really unnatural. I think it would have been better if you would've masked the clip not just a picture. Another thing was the link at 2:25 it just didn't make sense at all. first there is a dezoom of Sasuke's eye and the sharingan is rotating clockwise, then it starts rotating counter-clockwise  No , The first eye is the left eye but after the link the next eye is the right eye - that also doesn't make sense at all  scratch 

WDLKaiser track: Really cool track, loved the dynamics   http://illiweb.com/i  

To Aru.. Index track: Cool track GG, some colours seemed a little weird like at 2:50 but it may have been the anime's original colours maybe? the rhythm fell a little at the end but still not bad

Magi track: good track with nice transitions. The shake at 3:10 was a bit rough, but still it was a nice track  http://illiweb.com/i 

Overall the MEP was not bad at all guys GG It seems like you will improve fast Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Fri Jun 06, 2014 5:46 pm

I'm not going to go in such detail as the gentleman above me. I'm too lazy for that, sorry. :3
I really liked the Black Rock Shooter part.
Light said most of the things that caught my eye I guess. One thing that kinda bothered me was when the light blue text randomly popped up on 1:02. I really recommend not using any texts like this in AMVs, they're really ugly.
Otherwise it's a nice MEP, good job guys :3

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PostSubject: Re: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Sun Jun 15, 2014 4:53 pm

@Light
thank you very much friend, you really are a big critical, thanks for taking the time to criticize each part of the Mep all these criticisms help us so thanks Smile

@Kermo
Thank you very much friend Smile, thanks for the criticism and if all those details have to improve for our next project, I'm glad you liked the Mep; greetings Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Sun Jun 15, 2014 7:52 pm

lol np

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PostSubject: Re: [MEP] Black Storm HS   Tue Jun 17, 2014 2:21 pm

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@Light
thank you very much friend, you really are a big critical, thanks for taking the time to criticize each part of the Mep all these criticisms help us so thanks Smile

@Kermo
Thank you very much friend Smile, thanks for the criticism and if all those details have to improve for our next project, I'm glad you liked the Mep; greetings Very Happy

You're welcome! c:
Keep posting your works here for more feedback and stuff Smile

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